DSA Scrap off - Week 3 score

Only scored 1 last week! Gutted. Had some feedback though so it was good to get another perspective.
Here is my final effort: I was unsure whether to change it in light of the previous score but decided against it!


Titled: "Seeing"
DSA Scrap Off 2010 Mini Kits provided by:
BZB Designs, Charlize Creations, Correen Silke, geniaBeana Scraps,
Nikki Epperson, Ramona Brown ,Sir Scrapalot Designs